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Look into my eyes
Fall into sweet bliss
Release all your worries
As you hear my silent hiss
My eyes you cannot escape
You are trapped yet you are free
Stop trying to gain control
Come to me

Come to me my dear
I mean you great harm
But still you must not resist
As I hold out a welcomed arm
Fall into my world
A world where you can sleep
Forever you shall be apart
As long as your soul rests with me

Let me look at you
Believe in what I say
My lies you cannot deny
They shall guide you along the way
Let me take care of you
My eyes you shall not flee
Please, take one more step
And you shall soon belong to me

I can see that you are shaking
Yet your eyes are so still
You must come into my eyes
For I have lust to kill
I can hear your heartbeat
Your blood is flowing fast
I got you right where I want you
You are now mine at last

Closer...closer...closer
Feel your life melt
I can free you of all your sorrows
And pain you've ever felt
Close your eyes my sweet
Your life is now through
For trusting someone like me
...Your life has been stolen from you

I had you under my trance
Your blood now belongs to me
'Tis a shame I had to steal it
From someone who trusted me
But my needs are still not met
Who should I entrance next?
Oh, I've got a perfect suggestion
How 'bout the person reading this text?
I <3 Hypnosis!
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:iconsavageanimal98:
SavageAnimal98 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Great poem. But... I feel slighty...ooh..dizzy and tired.
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Obeyur Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
I cant resist my mind starts obeying @_@
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The-Trainer-Red Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Captivating text: 10/10
Hypnosis: level *portion of "you will know our names" plays*
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you have such high ratings for my writing, my dear! Thank you very much! ^^
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The-Trainer-Red Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Welcome :mewo:
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ISS51 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! So sleek and so dark! I love it! I love it so much!
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, my dear! I'm so glad you like it! ^^
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ISS51 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome!
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Maria-the-Fox Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is really good. I love the wording.

However, my dear, you have failed to hypnotize me.
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it, my dear!
Oh pooh! I failed, huh? *Shrugs* Well, it happens sometimes.
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Maria-the-Fox Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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HaNyaYume Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Its funny cause right now I don't think I would put up any resistance! xD But well the way you take us into your text is great it makes me wanna really go and stay there!
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Chuckles* Good to know. >:3
Thank you very much, my dear!
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HaNyaYume Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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Violettathehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You.. Won't.. Hypnotised.. Me..
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Chuckles* Are you so certain about that, my dear? >:3
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Violettathehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup... Or.. Maybe.. Not...
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longrunnerguy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hypnosis is fun, as is this poem. I like how the persuasive and lulling language of the narrator mingles with the more insidious intent.
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed, it is!
Thank you very much! X3
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longrunnerguy Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for creating this! It makes me want to try my hand at something similar. I adore the way words can be selected and weaved together to convey not only meaning for the reader, but also feelings and sensory information.
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01MinecraftFan Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have an OC who reminds me of this poem. :3
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that so?
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01MinecraftFan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. :)
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hypnoticwinx007 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Artist
Y...you w....will n..n.., not pppp...ut me ..in t.t.t.trance
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your resistance is futile, my dear. Not a soul in the world can resist MY power. >:3
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hypnoticwinx007 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Artist
I.....w....will r...r...re..sist 
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Ellias18 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I feel dazed and dizzy.....
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh! Heh! My trances get that a lot. >:3
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Ellias18 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Command me....
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:iconladydreammaker:
LadyDreamMaker Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I feel dizzy...
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Chuckles* Dizzy in a good way, my dear? >:3
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LadyDreamMaker Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's like When I drink a couple of beers...I Feel blurry my though
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nicolecooke0823 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014

you own my soul

 

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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Chuckles*
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ThunderingAlicorn Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@^@

SUCH HYPNOTISED. MANY SLEEPY. VERY COOL.
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Chuckles* I'm very glad you enjoyed it, my dear! >:3
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XXMagsCuteXX Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
-is resisting- n-no u can't take control of me..
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't think so, my dear?
*Grabs your collar and pulls you in close*
You'll belong to me soon enough, my sweet...
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XXMagsCuteXX Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
No..s-stop..
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hypnoslave1095 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
I'm so sleepy now...
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sleepy, my dear...>:3
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hypnoslave1095 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
yes... very sleepy
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xChelster1 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist
I really feel sleepy.. 
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Have no fear, my dear. Feeling sleepy under a trance of MINE is always a good thing. ;)
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xChelster1 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist
Maybe it had also to do that it was two o clock in the middle of the night xD
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HA! HA! That too! XD
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Nygiantsfan1029 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
I-I can't resist....
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You shall fall deeper and deeper into my trance, my dear. >:3
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Nygiantsfan1029 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Yes mistress I am completely under your spell
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Nygiantsfan1029 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
I love this script.  It really pulls me in.
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