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Look into my eyes
Fall into sweet bliss
Release all your worries
As you hear my silent hiss
My eyes you cannot escape
You are trapped yet you are free
Stop trying to gain control
Come to me

Come to me my dear
I mean you great harm
But still you must not resist
As I hold out a welcomed arm
Fall into my world
A world where you can sleep
Forever you shall be apart
As long as your soul rests with me

Let me look at you
Believe in what I say
My lies you cannot deny
They shall guide you along the way
Let me take care of you
My eyes you shall not flee
Please, take one more step
And you shall soon belong to me

I can see that you are shaking
Yet your eyes are so still
You must come into my eyes
For I have lust to kill
I can hear your heartbeat
Your blood is flowing fast
I got you right where I want you
You are now mine at last

Closer...closer...closer
Feel your life melt
I can free you of all your sorrows
And pain you've ever felt
Close your eyes my sweet
Your life is now through
For trusting someone like me
...Your life has been stolen from you

I had you under my trance
Your blood now belongs to me
'Tis a shame I had to steal it
From someone who trusted me
But my needs are still not met
Who should I entrance next?
Oh, I've got a perfect suggestion
How 'bout the person reading this text?
I <3 Hypnosis!
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SavageAnimal98 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member
Great poem. But... I feel slighty...ooh..dizzy and tired.
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Obeyur Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member
I cant resist my mind starts obeying @_@
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The-Trainer-Red Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Captivating text: 10/10
Hypnosis: level *portion of "you will know our names" plays*
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you have such high ratings for my writing, my dear! Thank you very much! ^^
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The-Trainer-Red Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Welcome :mewo:
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ISS51 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! So sleek and so dark! I love it! I love it so much!
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, my dear! I'm so glad you like it! ^^
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ISS51 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome!
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Maria-the-Fox Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is really good. I love the wording.

However, my dear, you have failed to hypnotize me.
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it, my dear!
Oh pooh! I failed, huh? *Shrugs* Well, it happens sometimes.
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