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June 24, 2010
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Look into my eyes
Fall into sweet bliss
Release all your worries
As you hear my silent hiss
My eyes you cannot escape
You are trapped yet you are free
Stop trying to gain control
Come to me

Come to me my dear
I mean you great harm
But still you must not resist
As I hold out a welcomed arm
Fall into my world
A world where you can sleep
Forever you shall be apart
As long as your soul rests with me

Let me look at you
Believe in what I say
My lies you cannot deny
They shall guide you along the way
Let me take care of you
My eyes you shall not flee
Please, take one more step
And you shall soon belong to me

I can see that you are shaking
Yet your eyes are so still
You must come into my eyes
For I have lust to kill
I can hear your heartbeat
Your blood is flowing fast
I got you right where I want you
You are now mine at last

Feel your life melt
I can free you of all your sorrows
And pain you've ever felt
Close your eyes my sweet
Your life is now through
For trusting someone like me
...Your life has been stolen from you

I had you under my trance
Your blood now belongs to me
'Tis a shame I had to steal it
From someone who trusted me
But my needs are still not met
Who should I entrance next?
Oh, I've got a perfect suggestion
How 'bout the person reading this text?
I <3 Hypnosis!
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longrunnerguy Apr 2, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Hypnosis is fun, as is this poem. I like how the persuasive and lulling language of the narrator mingles with the more insidious intent.
SwirlyEyesHypnotize Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed, it is!
Thank you very much! X3
longrunnerguy Apr 4, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for creating this! It makes me want to try my hand at something similar. I adore the way words can be selected and weaved together to convey not only meaning for the reader, but also feelings and sensory information.
01MinecraftFan Apr 2, 2014  Student Artist
I have an OC who reminds me of this poem. :3
SwirlyEyesHypnotize Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that so?
01MinecraftFan Apr 4, 2014  Student Artist
Yep. :)
hypnoticwinx007 Mar 23, 2014  New member Student Artist w....will n..n.., not pppp...ut me t.t.t.trance
SwirlyEyesHypnotize Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your resistance is futile, my dear. Not a soul in the world can resist MY power. >:3
hypnoticwinx007 Mar 25, 2014  New member Student Artist
Ellias18 Mar 20, 2014  New member
I feel dazed and dizzy.....
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